Journal #6

I decided to do most of my revisions based on flow and how well someone else could read it and make sense of it. Also I made a lot of revision to make more allusions, I renamed a lot of my characters to connect with history as well as renamed certain locations within the story. Hopefully the revisions I made will make the story more interesting and show the techniques that Hurston uses better. I also added some things so that I could write my statement of intent easier. All in all I think the revisions process helped a lot and I look forward to doing it more in class